FE9 Path of Radiance Localization: Was Greil’s “Harsh Scolding” a “Harsh Beating” in Japanese? [JPN vs ENG]

Please note there may be some spoilers in for Path of Radiance!

Today’s post is a brief request from a reader on another page of this blog. It was a simple concern:

In the English version of Path of Radiance, when Ike tried to touch the medallion, he says his father “scolded him harshly”. Remembering your article about the Shiro slap scene, I became curious and checked the Japanese script. I don’t know Japanese, so I checked Google translate. I honestly don’t know what I expected to find, but I was shocked and horrified that it looked like the “harsh scolding” was originally a bad beating. Maybe I’m just in denial, but I know Google translate is not all that reliable, so I hope you can confirm it for me.

 

The “Shiro slap scene” they mention is in reference to this previous comparison about Fire Emblem Fates.

The short answer: Yes, Greil did strike Ike in some way in Japanese.

For details, let’s take a look at the dialogue!

The scene in question is in Chapter 19 of Path of Radiance (Entrusted). It occurs in the post-battle dialogue scenes before the end of the chapter.

For context, Volke is telling Ike about his father (Greil) and his history with Lehran’s Medallion. Here is a few lines of dialogue around the one in question. The full exchange can be read on serenesforest:

Ike
I’m finding all of this a little hard to believe. You said the medallion was “an object of great peril,” didn’t you? Then why would my father allow Mist to carry it around? That doesn’t make any sense.

Volke
It’s because she can carry it safely. Actually, she’s the only one who can. If you want proof, think back. Have you ever once touched it?

Ike
…No. I haven’t. A long time ago, I remember reaching out for it while Mist had it in her hand… My father scolded me harshly. After that, I assumed…it was my sister’s alone, and I never reached for it again.

Volke
Compared to other people, the balance within your sister is extremely strong. Your mother, it seems, was the same. That’s why they could bear it safely. The medallion is like a strong poison. It takes the worst aspects of a person and magnifies them a thousandfold. Greil touched it only once, and it drove him to complete madness.

The text in question is in red. Let’s look at the Japanese equivalent of that paragraph:

……確かに、ない。かなり昔…ミストの手にあったのを触ろうとして……親父に…ひどく殴られて…それからは、なんとなく…俺が触れてはいけないものなんだと思っていた…

…I haven’t, no. A long time ago… I reached for it while Mist had it in her hand…my father…gave me a severe beating…after that, I just figured… that is not something I should ever touch…

From the literal translation, you can see that the localization is completely accurate, minus the line in red. The word Ike uses, 殴る (naguru) is a verb that means “to strike, hit, beat, or punch.” He uses it in passive voice, so would become “was struck/hit/beat/punched by my father.” While passive voice often does not need an actor, he mentions his father directly as the performer of the action (親父に oyaji ni). So the “scolding” was indeed a beating, or at least a hit.

As for “harsh,” that came from ひどく (hidoku), which means “cruel/harsh/severe/violent/etc.” It describes the beating/striking directly.

With the above, we know Greil gave Ike either a single severe blow, or a series of hits that ensured he would never try to touch the medallion again.

It should be noted that my translation says “severe beating” which may imply multiple hits, but it could have been a single, powerful hit. I point out this nuance simply for the record, as in English the word “beating” can mean a single or multiple hits.

So why the change?

Like with Shiro, parents striking children is likely a sensitive topic that the localization would prefer to avoid. While it may be more acceptable in one culture, it can be problematic in others, such as parts of the Western world. Perhaps there were ESRB concerns too, and, thinking as it is relatively inconsequential to change, they opted to go the path of least resistance. Greil either scolds, or beats, Ike to express the gravity of how dangerous that medallion is. There are not many references aside from this instance of Greil doing so, which may have made it purposefully jarring (in Japanese).

Ike holds unquestionable love and respect for his father despite the above in both languages, too, for those who are unaware of the context. That would imply it is, at the very least, not a regular scolding/beating purely out of abuse. It is probably why the single time we hear of it happening certainly left that much more of an impression as a result.

In short:

Yes, Ike was severely beaten (or at least, severely struck) by his father Greil for trying to touch that medallion. It was likely changed to avoid delving into what could be a sensitive topic, much like with Ryoma and Shiro in Fates. The end result is the same: Ike knew to never try to touch the medallion again after that.

Reference:

A summary infographic for your reference!


Well that does it for this brief comparison!

If you have any suggestions of what else to look into that you may be curious about, please feel free to leave a comment below!

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12 thoughts on “FE9 Path of Radiance Localization: Was Greil’s “Harsh Scolding” a “Harsh Beating” in Japanese? [JPN vs ENG]

  1. You know, I am really glad I asked about this. At the time I was just compiling Tellius scripts in one place for reference (and possibly to rewrite it in places where I felt it needed work), but, when I looked into this… I was surprised by how much it shook me up. Without even realizing it, Greil had become a comfort character for me, as a representation of the ideal parent I never had, so to find out he had done something so bad frightened me. It was like I wasn’t even safe in fiction.

    But I’ve come to terms with it. I have an idea for a fic, actually: the Black Knight, instead of killing Greil (because what sense does that make?) captures him and Ike so that they can extract the location of the medallion. They don’t think Greil will be easy to break, so they torture Ike to make Greil talk, all the while feeding him the idea that his father doesn’t care if he’s in pain or even wants him to be, and considering, well, *gestures to this article*, and he never got an explanation at the time, it gets harder and harder for him not to believe what they’re saying. Eventually, desperate to complete their goal, the captors have Ike confront Greil, holding a knife, in the hopes that by showing Greil he doesn’t have any control anymore they can break him. But Ike’s faith isn’t completely broken yet, and he’s willing to give Greil a chance to explain himself, with an armor-piercing question: why? Why let me suffer like this? Do you enjoy it? Greil at first repeats what he’s been saying all along: that he loves him, but “this is bigger than us”. Okay, but what about *gestures to this article*? Ike was just a child, what did he even DO? And then he can’t stop himself from doubting. Were all of their training sessions a way to bond and teach Ike a trade, so he could make it as an adult, or just Greil’s way of exercising sadistic power and control? Did Greil create him just to torment him? And finally Greil breaks down and admits he made a mistake–no, a mistake would be an accident, Greil chose to do something that was wrong. He violently attacked and hurt someone he loved, and he shouldn’t have, and he’s *sorry*. (Elena would have been ashamed of him! The way I imagine their dynamic, anyway, she’s a posthumous character so who knows, but I have some headcanons about them.) And something about this makes Ike stop and drop the knife and he feels terrible for doubting a father’s love and Greil says no, if you doubt my love, it’s my fault for not caring for you well enough. I’m the one who should be asking for your for forgiveness, and you’re free not to give it but regardless of your decision I will be a better father to you I swear. And Ike does forgive him, because what he needed was a sincere apology.

    And in imagining that, I realized that that’s what *I* need. My parents never really own up to their mistakes. They stick to their patterns of treating me badly and do not listen well to critique. Honestly, it’s too late for them, but maybe it wouldn’t have been if they had been in the habit of treating me like a person instead of like property from the start. I’ve given them so many chances–begging, demanding, whatever I thought it would take–to get sincere apologies and regret and CHANGE from them and it never happens. As soon as I can I’m getting out of the house (they’ve always made a point of saying it’s THEIR house, they’re just letting me stay there oh-so-generously… as if they don’t have a moral responsibility or obligation to provide for the person they created) and never talking to them again. And yet, my mother maintains the delusion that everything’s fine between us. She keeps making comments like “when you visit us…” as if I’m going to even answer their calls. Years from now they’ll be wondering what they did wrong even though I’ve spelled it out for them so many damn times.

    What I’m trying to say is… thank you for providing this service because without it I might not have been able to process my trauma in this way. It’s helping me heal. 🙂

    • Thank you for sharing the context for your thoughts, in-depth scene idea, and for the original article request.

      I am really glad a simple article has helped you heal, and I hope your own situation improves soon. Please come back and update us again once you’ve moved out and let us know how things are going. Cheering for your well-being! Maybe your parents will realize what they have lost only when its gone, which has some hope. But if not, you will have moved on and be a happier person, I’d think. : ) Stay strong!

      • Thank you for your kind words! It will be a few years before moving out since I have to finish college. But I like this blog and will be hanging around here and commenting from time to time :3

  2. Thanks for the translation! I’m not surprised they changed it since corporal punishment is so looked down upon when it used to be more of a norm in the past.

  3. [“Ike holds unquestionable love and respect for his father despite the above in both languages, too, for those who are unaware of the context. That would imply it is, at the very least, an authoritative kind of beating, rather than one purely out of abuse.”]

    I’m glad you added this to the entry, as I’ve seen people compare Greil to an abusive parent in the past and I could just not fathom it. It wasn’t out of denial, but out of knowing Greil’s character and the love he has to both the children he had with Elena (us knowing how much he loved her–i.e. his cutting the tendons to his dominant weapon hand to never injure another in so awful a way), he would never do that to Ike or Mist.

    Likewise for Ike, as he loved his father unconditionally so and just the story of Path of Radiance (and even their Fire Emblem Heroes chapter and that reunion at the Day of Devotion festival and their shared Tempest Trial) reflects that.

    • Yes, that is especially a helpful note for FE fans who may not have played these games. I would certainly not want to give an unfair impression of him!

      it’s hard to put it into words without supporting one side or the other, but I feel the emphasis on such a thing was that Greil cared so much for ensuring that the same fate that befell him not befall Ike in touching the thing that he would resort to even striking his beloved son to prevent it from happening.

    • Many people love their abusers. Personally, I’ve never forgiven my parents for all the times they hit me, but I’ve always had a lot of self-love–considering how low Ike’s self-esteem is at the beginning, he probably doesn’t and just figures he deserved to be hit at the time. And for the other side of the equation, I firmly believe most abusers–especially parents abusive to their children–love their victims. They just believe (like Greil does) that “love means you have to be strict” and their idea of “strict” takes it too far. The quote you took out really bothers me because it implies that if it isn’t *intentionally* abusive it doesn’t count, but hardly anyone is *intentionally* evil. (And, for the record, corporal punishment is more associated with authoritarian parenting styles than authoritative. There’s a major difference there–both styles have high demands for their children, but authoritative style has a high warmth and responsiveness that authoritarian lacks.) I’m not saying Greil is necessarily abusive, but mutual love doesn’t rule out the possibility of abuse in a relationship. Personally I have mixed feelings about this–I believe corporal punishment is abusive because of the negative psychological effects it has on people (some of which Ike exhibits!), but the effects that would have happened if he had touched the medallion would have probably been worse… but that doesn’t mean Greil had to hit Ike to get him to understand that he shouldn’t touch it. So I think that while Greil is a mostly good person, he made a mistake here.

      • Thank you for the comment! I’ve been editing that part of the article slightly since I felt it may come off as too simple, generalized, or forgiving, so am still trying to find a better way to put it. I think there are the cultural aspects at play here too, not that it would justify any sort of action to the target culture (and thus was changed).

        I think you worded it well though, generally good and made a mistake – which would tie back to just how grave he saw the potential situation. Reacted in the moment, even if there were better ways to go about it in retrospect.

        • Maybe try something like “Ike holds love and respect for his father etc… So he likely understands that his father would not do something like this just to hurt him/out of malice, but would assume it was “for his own good” for lack of a better phrase” (Not trying to write your article for you. Just a suggestion :3)

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